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2020-08-23 23:38

Be it in terms of writing quality, creativity or development, this is easily one of the best stories on this site. So many original stories written here are of a lamentably poor standard, with poor grammar and stereotypical plot to satisfy pre**** angsty cravings. I can say with full sincerity that this story is a different existence, and one of the few original stories written at a professional standard. The characters are unique, interesting and captivating, the world is well designed with interesting mysteries and I have found myself reading with bated breath to find out more of the characters' backgrounds and cannot wait to see what happens next. I highly highly recommend this book, and hope that the BL tag will not stop any potential readers as while it is an important element, this story is well worth a read for its other aspects regardless.

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Thank you for such a detailed review! Each and every chapter, without exaggeration, is a product of... way too much thinking. I try to craft this story as masterfully as I can. I'm pleased to hear that it delivers professionally and cleanly!

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Greetings to the author! Writing Quality The writing quality is impressive. The author has a unique way of describing certain scenarios that can catch the reader's attention. When it comes to vocabulary, I have not seen any misspelled words or terms. The paragraphs are not that long and not that short. The length is precise. Stability of Updates This is an automatic five stars for me! I assume the author updates frequently so his/her readers won't be left behind. Aside from this, there are a total of nine chapters so far. Story Development There are nine chapters, and it seems to me that the story has a perfect flow. It's not fast and it's not slow either. When it comes to details, the author only described what's important, unlike other authors who describe everything just for the sake of increasing word count. World Background I have no complaints when it comes to the world background. The descriptions are vivid and unique. The readers can portray what the author wants the portray. When it comes to the dialogues, it seems genuine and well-thought. Characters When it comes to the characters, the author has a unique way of describing their characteristic. Each character has a unique nature(Characteristic) which is one factor that I love in this book. Overall: This book will be given a total of five stars! I recommend this novel to everyone in webnovel. The readers won't be left behind since the author updates frequently perhaps. Keep up the good work author! This review is brought to you by: Snom! The cutest Pokemon in the world!!!

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