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LeopardPride
LeopardPrideLv24yr
2020-07-19 10:26

This is a great story. I love everything about it. I'm new to webnovel, but this is amazing! The way the author describes everything and has created the characters make it very interesting and it has great action in it. It even has zombies and BL, which are both soft spots for me. 😍

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yiyuehua
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Thank you! The author uses their single, hard-driven brain cell in every chapter. I hope you'll enjoy this story to its completion! :)

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Greetings to the author! Writing Quality The writing quality is impressive. The author has a unique way of describing certain scenarios that can catch the reader's attention. When it comes to vocabulary, I have not seen any misspelled words or terms. The paragraphs are not that long and not that short. The length is precise. Stability of Updates This is an automatic five stars for me! I assume the author updates frequently so his/her readers won't be left behind. Aside from this, there are a total of nine chapters so far. Story Development There are nine chapters, and it seems to me that the story has a perfect flow. It's not fast and it's not slow either. When it comes to details, the author only described what's important, unlike other authors who describe everything just for the sake of increasing word count. World Background I have no complaints when it comes to the world background. The descriptions are vivid and unique. The readers can portray what the author wants the portray. When it comes to the dialogues, it seems genuine and well-thought. Characters When it comes to the characters, the author has a unique way of describing their characteristic. Each character has a unique nature(Characteristic) which is one factor that I love in this book. Overall: This book will be given a total of five stars! I recommend this novel to everyone in webnovel. The readers won't be left behind since the author updates frequently perhaps. Keep up the good work author! This review is brought to you by: Snom! The cutest Pokemon in the world!!!

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