Review Detail of Achyut_Jha in The Mage of Primordial Chaos

The plot and background of the story are very interesting, but the story is too slow paced while not being as engaging to do justice to the pace of the story. Additionally, the age of the main characters is too young for them to properly engage in the harem storyline properly. The author is starting good but isn't the smartest narrator while going into the mind game aspect of the story either. He has a good room for growth, but, at best, his overall writing skills are average. I look forward to his growth.