Review Detail of Blackwater in The Mage of Primordial Chaos

It's a good and well rounded story, the progression is a bit slow especially in the beginning where it dregs a bit. Quality wise the story is stable, no major flaws, the flow and timing is good. The Development of the Characters is pretty cliche, the MC warned of it. But it's a solid story in a solid world. Personally I'm not a big fan of the Development but that is not for a lack of quality but because it's more mystery and drama heavy than I anticipated, and I'm not in the mood for something like that. But doesn't take away that the story itself is a nice read