Review Detail of Qwestar in One piece: Instant mastery system(Droped)
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I like the story as of now, it does have some issues with grammar and using words in the wrong places, my only gripe, however small to me is that he didn’t stay on the island he was at with his old cabin to train some more, he said they had plenty boats, etc, meaning that there will for the most part always be a boat to steal, why not capitalize and train? He could try to craft and get that to mastery with his system, try blacksmithing, it would also help with building physical strength and he could make himself his own sword, I just didn’t see why he could not have stayed and capitalize, maybe cause he’s a ****? Anyway, I will continue to read, and give updates, but as of now, it’s a pretty decent read. As far as story development? It’s one piece... Character development? So far meh World? Same thing...it’s a fanfic of cannon
One piece: Instant mastery system(Droped)
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Update: Guy gets dumber, chapter 14 he finds a new sword to replace his old one, again why not just idk....make a better one? Why is he not trying tailoring to make a better clothing with some time of armor? Why did he suddenly unlock the training skill when he’s been training for 1 month prior to him training for 3 months when he unlocked it? Why only train for 3 months when he has the cheat? Again he should have stayed on the island and gotten all the skills like I and the guy above said, this is getting stupid