Review Detail of TheBaum in HP transmigrated into Domeric Bolton (GOT and HP crossover)

Good Writing Quality don't have much to add unto that. Stable updates except in recent times, that's why only 4 starts there considering in the past it was better. In the beginning a very fast development (almost too fast) but then a nice and slow pace in which almost everything is explained nicely. Character Design is on the weaker side because when we look at the MC it isn't explained much why he's suddenly not the expected version of himself. Further other characters intents aren't explained much and that gives a sort of unfinished feeling to the story. Also the romance does feel kind of forced because I feel that it isn't explained why it happened.... World Background also not full marks because it's an Fan-fic (duh...) but that means that you didn't have to put that much thought into the world as a completely new one. At the same time you tried to give this story your touch so that it becomed your interpritation and with that your work. I can recognize that.