seems fair

I guess, that he knows this from the forum. That doesnt change the fact tho that the entire story so far feels heavily like that the MC has a pretty thicc plot armor.

Im gonna have to remember that one...

really really liked this chaptar

It is more accurate to say, that it was a try to turn her into a demon. This is the result. Just a try at correcting pls dont hate...

I posted a paragraph comment on this story before. In this comment i got very emotional about a very well written part of this story. This is not such a paragraph.

This is the first time that i am so emotional about a paragraph in a fictional book... This is incredibly well written. I don't care wether it's a translation or not. The author has my deepest respect. Today i am going to visit my grandparents grave.

I thought that the author had already forgoten about this mechanic...

I havent proceeded in the Story very much but it would be very interesting to read, on how it affects the MC in everyday life on how he deals with the speed up of his brain For example: The next day i find myself eating breakfast in the great hall and Malfoy and his troupè walk up to me (do certain things) so i speed up my brain to do witchcraft faster. After that he notices that hos body fehlst pretty slugish, at learst compared to his sped up state

A good Fanfiction without a doubt. But its still just a translation from a chinese fanfiction and the english translation is not perfect. I can recommend this story but online to people who enjoy these wuxia kind of stories. Altough the wuxia isnt very streng in these one.

I wouldn`t say that it is a straight up copy but the similarities are definitely there like: the publishing of these books, the meet up with different muggleborns to etablish a secret organization, the aides, etc. (And we really should not forget the name of the author which is suspicously the same as the mc of The Muggleborn Conspiracy...) The differences are till chapter 26 (where i stopped reading until now): different motivation of the MC, different starting point of the MC, ... ... ... Now that I think about there arent really that many differences besides the MC...

Good Writing Quality don't have much to add unto that. Stable updates except in recent times, that's why only 4 starts there considering in the past it was better. In the beginning a very fast development (almost too fast) but then a nice and slow pace in which almost everything is explained nicely. Character Design is on the weaker side because when we look at the MC it isn't explained much why he's suddenly not the expected version of himself. Further other characters intents aren't explained much and that gives a sort of unfinished feeling to the story. Also the romance does feel kind of forced because I feel that it isn't explained why it happened.... World Background also not full marks because it's an Fan-fic (duh...) but that means that you didn't have to put that much thought into the world as a completely new one. At the same time you tried to give this story your touch so that it becomed your interpritation and with that your work. I can recognize that.