Okay I have read until last update (chapter 60) before I decided to drop the story....the plot is decent , the reading is relatively entertaining and the writing style is better than most (this is why I didn't put a 1 star review despite what forced me to drop the story) so I could overlook some things I didn't like plot wise in the beginning of the story (like forcefully slowing down the Mc progress in bullshit ways to avoid him getting strong too quickly; twisting the plot to force not so much the harem route but adding other women in the pairing outside of bulma and chichi who [chichi and bulma] somewhat could be paired with this mc in a kinda natural way since even in Canon it wouldn't have been far fetched ) but then this chapter came and while I could skip it and any similar chapter it would still reduce my enjoyment of reading this story so this is why I decided to drop this work..at first I didn't plan for a review but I think it is fair for all the people who share my lack of appreciation for a few things to give a fair warning that isn't present in the plot summary : there is FUTA just introduced in chapter 60 and while maybe the author and anyone liking FUTA would probably say that it isn't a true FUTA because of the way the author introduced it ....i would be calling them liars because if the Mc not only have extra copies of his little bro grow on other women (even though it is implied mc can still feel everything from them like if they were attached to himself) but he already said there is a way for the women to feel what happen to this extra appendage attached to them ... It is FUTA no matter what and adding how it is implied it won't be a 1 time thing and that it seems a couple of the women (kale and caulifla) of the Mc are very eager for it: in particular kale who is presente as in love with caulifla and not Goku .. So under a certain pov you could say you have a pseudo NTR So I have said everything I wanted to say in particular the warning for everyone who don't like FUTA ...and author while I thank you for your work and what was an enjoyable reading for me until c59 ... I still repeat what I wrote in the comment of chapter 60 : FUTA is one of the thing that you must tag explicitly to make aware your readers .... In the future don't forget to give warning about delicate and controversial tags [ for me controversial tags are things like not only FUTA but even Ntr, ****** and the likes] if you plan (I don't know if you have the idea of writing in a more "professional/lucrative" way or not ) to keep writing and maybe even gaining something from your writing remeber to add warning for things like that I rember a sort of cultivation novel that went premium and suddenly without any warning it became full of FUTA and Ntr and the author didn't give a warning to avoid losing potentials readers....a dick move since after that scammy stunt I am among the people who will never even read any of his book even if he wrote something without any hint of r18 materials of any kind.
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I introduced it this way to gague the audience if they want something like this. Thats why I put in the A/T if I should continue in that direction or stop. Thank you for your input but one of the reasons why the R18+ chapters have no impact on the story is to have it so that people can just skip those chapters without reprecussions. Hope you continue the story if you enjoyed it in the past!
Yes but the nagging feeling of that being there would still be present...if you wanted them truly indipendente from the story thenyou could make a side story where to put all the R18 chapters (something that in general i don't mind reading if they don't Co tian things who aren't my cup of tea) nevertheless it is your story so your decision. No matter what good luck and hope you will keep writing because you are in the top percentile of the decent author here on web novel
PostLost:I introduced it this way to gague the audience if they want something like this. Thats why I put in the A/T if I should continue in that direction or stop. Thank you for your input but one of the reasons why the R18+ chapters have no impact on the story is to have it so that people can just skip those chapters without reprecussions. Hope you continue the story if you enjoyed it in the past!
