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2020-06-04 18:37

I have to praise the author since he pulled me into a high fantasy world where the magic system is interesting. It was slow pace at start then later it picked up on the rhythm. I also like the quotes at the beginning of the chapters. There were just minor grammatical errors such as missing periods, and comma were being used instead of period. But thi can be fixed later on. Keep up the good work!

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