Review Detail of NotUse in I lost everything but my will

The author's writing style is quite unique, I must say. Especially when it comes to the dialogues, they're not the usual and common boring dialogues that everyone reads. Or in short, it's not cliche. When it comes to the story development, it is smooth so far, (five chapters) I have no complaints when it comes to character development, especially when it comes to Jena and Jade. The author describes the characters in order for the readers to portray what the author wants them to portray. Aside from this, it got me hooked from the very beginning. Overall: I will be giving five stars! Keep up the good work and do your best.