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MatchaMilk
MatchaMilkLv44yr
2020-06-06 15:17

Honestly, first of all I think the synopsis doesnt do the story justice, imo. I didnt read the tags at first so I was quite surprised to see that this had cultivation and a system! Either way its a pretty good story, it flows nicely and I really like the writing style as its written beautifully and emotional, fitting the tone of the story. We also get to know Jena through it better, the way her feelings and thoughts are expressed speaks to the reader. However, my complaint is, author please make shorter paragraphs! It will make the story easier to read and it would also benefit to let the dialogue stand on its own and not disappear in the paragraphs bc the dialogue is great and deserves it! All in all, great story thats totally worth giving a try! Hope author keeps it up!

I lost everything but my will

_Tesla
4.7
32 Chs

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Thanks so much for this

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NotUse
NotUseLv4

The author's writing style is quite unique, I must say. Especially when it comes to the dialogues, they're not the usual and common boring dialogues that everyone reads. Or in short, it's not cliche. When it comes to the story development, it is smooth so far, (five chapters) I have no complaints when it comes to character development, especially when it comes to Jena and Jade. The author describes the characters in order for the readers to portray what the author wants them to portray. Aside from this, it got me hooked from the very beginning. Overall: I will be giving five stars! Keep up the good work and do your best.

4yr

phantom6_sensei
phantom6_senseiLv3

If you're looking for a great female lead faceslapping book this is the book for you. And the update frequency is consistent so you know a new chapter comes out soon.

4yr
Zion_Adeduwon
Zion_AdeduwonLv1

Good book. Can't wait to read ur next book. Can't wait to see the continuation of the book. I couldn't enjoy the book alone my siblings had to join me. Good work. Keep it up

4yr
Zennyy
ZennyyLv1

There are so many "Jena" around. Helpless children who are forced into all sort. Little wonder we have some young monsters...who knows what they went through. I am really looking forward to seeing what eventually happened to Jena in this story. Great book and a wonderful writing skills. You got me glued to reading it till the end and still wanting more. Kudos 👌

4yr
phantom6_sensei
phantom6_senseiLv3

It's awesome. You really get to understand the main characters circumstances and traits in a short time, and the way she keeps a good attitude withstanding all she's been through at such an early age is commendable. Please update.

4yr
Natural_Mint
Natural_MintLv4

I like the title of this book, and just like the titles, the book itself is also nice to read as well. I'm curious to see how the story will continue on! Keep up the good work!

4yr
Blackturtle
BlackturtleLv3

At first I was trying to understand the plot. But reading thru chapter 1 and 2 i caught it. I really feel sorry for the 13yrs old Jenna. This story tells a lot about the modern world. Nice one author keep up this promising story. 👍👍

4yr
Awoo_Awoo
Awoo_AwooLv2

Well, this is a nice journey. The writing quality is good. The situation of the main character, especially at the beginning, makes you want to empathize/ emotionally connect with her. I can't wait to see how Jena develops in the future chapters. So far this is truly great. It's easy to understand too.

4yr
Blank_thought
Blank_thoughtLv10

I will be giving 5 stars to this, I really like it ^^ The writing, the story development and the descriptions were fantastic. Everything was great from the title of the novel, which is very attracting, till the last chapter I read. I'm sorry this review is not going to be helpful because I don't have any bad remarks '^^. Good luck on the contest, you must win! You deserve it :)

4yr
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