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I have some mixed feelings but overall It's decent. I might change this review as the story goes. The world background is at a 5 mainly because the world has lots of potentials but that's mainly because it has all the lore and groups from the SCP multiverse. The writing quality is nice and I didn't notice any crippling grammar mistakes just a few misspelled words. The stability of updates is not consistent but could be released every 1-3 weeks (so far). The characters I don't know how to rank them. I'm not good at writing, grammar, or know an underrated story. Story development sometimes feels too fast, but that's my opinion, and the story is slowly improving on the issue. Overall it has its ups and downs, but I'm a little biased for SCP fanfic (probably because of the lack of ongoing SCP fanfic). So I'm going to give a four-star instead of a 3.8 or 3.6 star. Ps: I'm also a novice reviewer so I might get somethings wrong.

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Reborn in the SCP universe

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It's a weird feeling being happy to hear your stuff criticized, but its exactly what I need right now so thank you. I know I'm not the best at painting a mental picture and I do apologize for it, and the pacing is something I'm working on. honestly character is something I'm both good and bad at, I have a good understanding of how to develop a character throughout a story but I'm learning that it's much harder in practice. Trying to display a character's personality is the biggest pain.