Review Detail of Plowbat in D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad
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just arrived to chapter 195 at time of review. The story's premise is interesting, I like the hook and how it's introduced into the world that could be ours. It's got great potential, with lots of wiggle room to prevent it becoming stale. I like to see the Mc struggle with her powers over a longer time, instead of coincidentally finding a solution; no deus ex feeling. Onto the nitpicks, this is now a contracted story, and could seriously use a proofreading to correct basic english mistakes, typos and wrong pronouns/names. That alone would make it an excellent read instead of a simply interesting one, as I had to re-read passages sometimes when it got too glaring (special mention to the abundent Thyme/time errors in book 2). I'm also not a fan of Sylvie's unnatural maturity, speech and decision making, but at this point, and there's been maybe some hints, I've made my peace with this being a future plot point. Overall a read I'd recommand, but if you're going to make money with it, I'll plead again please find a proofreader to fix the basic mistakes.
D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad
Vongrak
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Really? Then I apologize for presuming the situation. However, the fact stands that there's still work to do and with three people I'm surprised that's the case.
Vongrak:A note on proofreading. I have a discord where I request mistakes be sent in. I also have 3 proofreaders, which I thank for their services
Yeah that's sadly just a fact of how much I end up writing. I try to get most of the errors, but at the end of the day, I tend to let things lie unless someone posts the mistake on my discord, and it's a major mistake.
Plowbat:Really? Then I apologize for presuming the situation. However, the fact stands that there's still work to do and with three people I'm surprised that's the case.