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Plowbat11mthCommentedCh 66 Back to the Arena- Plowbat1yrCommentedCh 62 The Ritual Begins
- Plowbat1yrCommentedCh 249 Until the Bubble Pops
- Plowbat1yrReplied to Vixdraconen
thank you! i feel the same when i write.
"Now visit town, meet people in temple! Say meet scary beast, come back. No say dad dead? See house for God-Tree dad friends, say hello." - Plowbat1yrReplied to Vixdraconen
he can fit in your palm, like an orange. with noodly arms. and a leaf hat. he's cute.
"Wait, you've already managed to make that crystallized magic thing? You really are a freak. Don't tell that to elementalists, they'll spit blood from the shock you know. And, I'm not big." - Plowbat1yrCommentedCh 60 Roused into Exposition
- Plowbat1yrCommentedCh 247 Whispers and Screams
- Plowbat2yrCommentedCh 493 Chapter 493 What Shall We Do with a Panicked Miner
- Plowbat2yrCommented
it's from harry potter, the mirror of Erised (desire).
After that, Kat and Kamiko discovered a surprising number of items that didn't seem to work. There was a mirror that was supposedly called 'The Mirror of Erisid' but it had a huge crack running down the middle and a note saying 'Out of Order' on it. Kat and Kamiko tried looking at it, but instead of their reflections, only black space was in the frame. - Plowbat3yrReplied to BoneMarrow
At the current time, yes. There's more to it though, which is explained later on.
Mark and Aldo entered at the same time, Mark mimicking Kilb with his axe and Aldo with the knife he was handed. Maya hesistated a bit before taking a deep breath and doing the same. She had already met other worshippers of Kali before, but that was at home! Not in one of their biggest families on the continent, and in their temple at that! She was ready to heal everyone, but was stopped by a glare from Klib who knew how weak she was to pain. Healing a self-inflicted wound showing respect for Kali with magic was one of the worst blasphemy possible. - Plowbat3yrCommented
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This chapter has been deleted. - Plowbat3yrCommentedCh 6 How about a map? (not a story chapter)
- Plowbat3yrCommentedCh 45 The Match Starts... And Ends???
- Plowbat3yrPosted
just arrived to chapter 195 at time of review. The story's premise is interesting, I like the hook and how it's introduced into the world that could be ours. It's got great potential, with lots of wiggle room to prevent it becoming stale. I like to see the Mc struggle with her powers over a longer time, instead of coincidentally finding a solution; no deus ex feeling. Onto the nitpicks, this is now a contracted story, and could seriously use a proofreading to correct basic english mistakes, typos and wrong pronouns/names. That alone would make it an excellent read instead of a simply interesting one, as I had to re-read passages sometimes when it got too glaring (special mention to the abundent Thyme/time errors in book 2). I'm also not a fan of Sylvie's unnatural maturity, speech and decision making, but at this point, and there's been maybe some hints, I've made my peace with this being a future plot point. Overall a read I'd recommand, but if you're going to make money with it, I'll plead again please find a proofreader to fix the basic mistakes.