Hello, dear author. What is written here is a criticism of my indignation. It's not about grammar or anything, I'm just angry, because these four chapters were missing a lot of important things. First point: dragon divisions are wrong, dragons of five colors (White, Black, Green, Blue and Red.) These are considered evil dragons, since they originated from Tiamat, the dragon goddess who lives in the abyss. Second Point: The Red Dragon is the strongest of the five-colored dragons, so he is the embodiment of tyranny and evil. They like to eat humans and elves mainly. They do not mate with dragons of other colors, because they think others are weaker than themselves. Third point: I want you to explain to me, how, a red dragon (fire) together with a blue dragon (Lightning and thunder) that you placed with the ice element, generated, a green, a white and a red dragon. I understand red, the father is a red dragon. But what about the other two? Green and white? Seriously, just explain it to me! The lineage of dragons is inherited from their parents, there is no way to be born white and green! Calm….. Author, just so you know. Green and white dragons are a totally different breed, each color has its characteristics and powers. Fourth point: What made me angrier than you didn't say the real names of the dragons, if the author doesn't know, I explain. The Dragon's real name comes from blood, which means that the dragon inherited all of the dragons' heritage that they have accumulated for tens of thousands of years. The real name comes when the dragon has just hatched. If the dragon does not speak his real name, it means that he did not inherit dragons' heritage, these dragons are considered "dragon beasts" without intelligences. They are usually killed when they are born by their parents. Fifth point: Silver dragon left me almost having a heart attack, two evil dragons gave birth to a silver dragon. It left me speechless. Thanks for reading this far. Sorry, I'm just a fan in love with dragons, when I see something wrong, I get stressed. Five-color dragons or Chromatic dragons. Considered evil, symbolizing all greed for gold and shiny things, they are symbols of evil and tyranny. Created by Tiamat, the dragon goddess who lives in the abyss. White Dragon (Ice), Black Dragon (Acid), Dragon (Poison), Blue Dragon (Lightning and Thunder) and Red Dragon (Fire). Metal Dragons Considered good dragons, symbolizing Justice and Goodness. Created by Bahamut, dragon god and his daughter. Brass Dragon, Bronze Dragon Copper Dragon, Silver Dragon, Golden Dragon.
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may I just say something? have you looked at the science part of this it would be possible because of dominant and recessive genes just saying. or maybe they have mutated genes. I know D&D is the best dragon knowledge source but this is a different world so things are possibly different. just saying not everything is the same everywhere. I just wanted to let you know that. but still, you make a good point!
I know, I'm just a fan in love with dragons. hehehe, I hope the author does not feel offended, apart from the dragons, the whole novel is good
Dont worry im not offended, I Know your point of view but as Jules said, there is other world.
