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Kenrio
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2021-04-06 09:45

I think I was pretty ****ed up in the head to read more to chapter 20 couple of months ago, now that I tried to read it again I see how painful to read the fic become after chapter five. you can clearly see author dont know what he's found when he started writing and even if he become better in the more advanced chapters the first 10 chapters is a rule I abide now. if the first 10 chapter are shit I stop read in and that fanfic for me is completely shit so to not waste time with so many good story waiting in my list

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TheEnlightenedSage
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😅 How about you try my One Piece fic? I think that it is way better than the Naruto one. Thanks for the review 😂✌️

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