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Might_Cho
Might_ChoLv144yr
2020-05-30 23:18

Writing Quality : 5* only negligible typo mistake Updates : 5* 7 chaps a week is pretty good Story : 5* so far pretty good, just need more details. Char. : 4* do steady development please. World : 4* need more details, please add movie arc ¬That chapter with that Inari kid is felt forced. Please do MC character development steadily. ¬Need more interaction with Hinata and show some her POV ¬MC needs to learn Medical Ninjutsu, his control is enough, do experiments with Hashirama cell ¬Make the story pace slower please, he is already in he is already in Elite Jonin Tier in chapter 1, I love him getting OP, but this is too fast, with this pace in less 100 chap he will dominate naruto world and go other universe. 😂

Naruto: The Shinobi Genius

TheEnlightenedSage
3.9
83 Chs

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Might_Cho
Might_ChoLv14

Elite Jonin Tier in chapter 14

4yr
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Kurigohan
KurigohanLv5

Who mc pairing? And harem or no harem?

4yr
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Kurigohan
KurigohanLv5

Who mc pairing? And harem or no harem?

4yr
2
Might_Cho
Might_ChoLv14

Only hinata so far, no harem I think, but I'm not the author, so who knows

Kurigohan:Who mc pairing? And harem or no harem?
4yr
4
ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

You were right it didnt last 100 chaps only 80

Might_Cho:Only hinata so far, no harem I think, but I'm not the author, so who knows
4yr
4
Orange_Car_Slave
Orange_Car_SlaveLv13

xp

4yr
2
Wvttz
WvttzLv4

movie arc isnt a need since its not even canon regardless if fanfic or not

3yr
Wvttz
WvttzLv4

he said no early in chapters

Might_Cho:Only hinata so far, no harem I think, but I'm not the author, so who knows
3yr
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Carrotwarrior
CarrotwarriorLv4

I really like the fact that the mc is very calculative. for a fan-fic it is a great read, the only thing that will make this great is if the updates and the quality would be consistent or better. I'm really hoping for steady release.

4yr

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6

Thanks for the good work sensei I 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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West
WestLv7

Reveal spoiler

4yr
ShirasakiSan
ShirasakiSanLv3

Seems my precious review was deleted so I will just give this rating without explaining again. Peace. You will definitely regret reading this.

4yr
The_Grindelwald
The_GrindelwaldLv5

I can't even start to imagine how so much people can rate this at 5 stars... It's really unpleasant to read, there's a lot of typos, the grammar is below average. World building and character design are inexistant but it's maybe because I only read 10 chapters but I can't stand more. All the characters are OOC and the MC is an as*hole and an evil psychopath and for no reason... The only MC's goal is to become the strongest, it's okay when we know all the sh*t that will happen to Naruto in the canon but there's no need to become a psychopath in order to do so, not when you are the 9 tailed jinchuriki, knowledge of everything in Naruto verse and have a system to help you...

4yr
Juhiko
JuhikoLv6

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Howtofred
HowtofredLv5

Writer deleted my review so just gonna leave this. It's sudden with no transitions. It's poorly written as well with completely empty plot holes.

4yr
Elder
ElderLv11

F.ked up at chapter 9. Read it first then decide do you want to read. I'm not recommend it. Totally wasted good start. .......................

4yr
AvengerV
AvengerVLv4

Reveal spoiler

4yr
LostThe50_50
LostThe50_50Lv6

Writing quality......its not that bad the grammar i mean.... Updates........?what do i even say here? Story development.......essentially story development is skipping all the important parts by using a time skip, like how did naruto suddenly posses the reanimation jutsu......or like how we missed the milestone of him making new fuinjutsu seals.....or skipping most of the parts on how he could even grow stronger aside from the *usual* training the naruto fanfics use. Character design.......mc isnt cunning......just retarded.........he sacrificed an innocent genin and blackmailed him by using the genins family against him, character development....is almost negligible.......negligible because there was CD in the start.....with shikamaru.....but aside from that.....every other character was practically added there for the sake of adding it there......Ex: Hinata.............yep dunno a thing except apparantly mc changed her by the use of a Legendary Time Skip....so yeah more details left untold...... World background.....non existent, if i could leave this with a zero i would but yeah.....you cant.... This novel is like one of those, where the only thing thats being "built-up" is the MC power and not really the mc himself.......yeah not my type of novel. Good luck with the novel though, just because i may not like it, doesnt mean others will🤷🤷🤷

4yr
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