Writing quality......its not that bad the grammar i mean.... Updates........?what do i even say here? Story development.......essentially story development is skipping all the important parts by using a time skip, like how did naruto suddenly posses the reanimation jutsu......or like how we missed the milestone of him making new fuinjutsu seals.....or skipping most of the parts on how he could even grow stronger aside from the *usual* training the naruto fanfics use. Character design.......mc isnt cunning......just retarded.........he sacrificed an innocent genin and blackmailed him by using the genins family against him, character development....is almost negligible.......negligible because there was CD in the start.....with shikamaru.....but aside from that.....every other character was practically added there for the sake of adding it there......Ex: Hinata.............yep dunno a thing except apparantly mc changed her by the use of a Legendary Time Skip....so yeah more details left untold...... World background.....non existent, if i could leave this with a zero i would but yeah.....you cant.... This novel is like one of those, where the only thing thats being "built-up" is the MC power and not really the mc himself.......yeah not my type of novel. Good luck with the novel though, just because i may not like it, doesnt mean others will๐คท๐คท๐คท
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