Item: Pursuit of Love : Adorable Husband and Precious Wife
Rating: 5
Author: Overlord_Venus

Overlord_VenusLv144yr

2020-07-05 03:39

This if fluff at its prime. I like the story as it paints a warm feeling in me. This is pink hearted for the most part and reading it makes me sport a foolish grin (Man, it was embarrassing when my family members saw me staring at my laptop screen and grinning like an idiot). The father character is really well written, and feels like someone to look up to. The author's ample grasp of the language allows her to play with words and mess with us reader's feeling haha

Pursuit of Love : Adorable Husband and Precious Wife

KCChakry

4.7

21 Chs

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KCChakryAuthor

Author here, to say something good about the story. Hehe Writing Quality and Stability of Updates: I have confidence in my writing and storytelling ability. I may not be able to write a chapter every day, but every chapter I publish will be thoroughly edited and free of grammatical errors and inconsistencies. I take extra time and make sure my readers have a smooth reading experience. Currently, I'm updating one chapter per week but I'm working on providing more regular updates and will try to update as frequently as possible. That being said I guarantee the quality of my writing and the story will not deteriorate. Story Development and Character Design: I tend to start my novels at a slow pace. The first 15 or so chapters will be slow, as I like to take my time establishing the tone and personality of the main leads and the other important supporting characters. As such, the later chapters will pick up speed. And don’t take the main characters at their face value, as Lucian is not just a CEO, actually its just his temporary title. He is much more and his actually profession is something cool and interesting. In similar way, Violette is not just a damsel in distress and she won’t join the entertainment industry which is a go to in almost all such novels. In fact, she is an architect and most of the story will revolve around the fields of building construction and business administration. Every other character also has their purpose, backstory and will have their happy ending. But maybe not all characters. Some of them deserve to be face slapped and taught a lesson, right? Hehe. The characters all have diverse personalities and are grounded with their own life events happening which will tie in with the main plot later on. Speaking of main plot, it isn’t all about romance and fluff, but there is a major plot brewing in the background with all the intrigues of mystery as we unravel it slowly one layer at a time. Also, the kids will be the highlight of the story. Yes, there are more than one kid and no, the focus of the story will still be the husband and wife, but the kids will play a significant role which I’m sure will be very entertaining to read. World Background: Story is set in the few fictional cities located in Canada and parts of Europe. We will explore those when we get to it. And lastly, I would love to read serious critique tearing apart my book than an obligatory 5 star review. Im not saying I dont like 5 star reviews, I love them and I will be humbled if you feel so. But dont think too much about how to put together a proper review. Even a silly comment saying 'LOVE THE STORY SOOOO MUCH. PLEASE UPDATE MORE' will be appreciate just as much. Thanks for reading my story!

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NorthStarLv12

First sentence i like this story. Thank you for this story author. 1. The starting is nicely laid out. Charlie match making VIollette - her quiet demeanor not resisting outwardly while fulfilling Charlie’s final wish - i felt this is portrayed effectively and excellently through the use of words and language expressively. 2. The subtle understanding from Lucian’s character on Violette’s predicament, the gentle, caring nature is nicely described from just reading the initial chapters. 3. Violette’s character - looking forward to uncover more on her past...reading about her intrigued me as a reader so well done in placing the little curiosity trigger. 4. The other characters - Jake the slightly cheeky notorious brother and the mother and daughter at the food truck their introduction into the plot brings added humour and colour so good stuff 5. I foresee interesting chapters ahead how things will work out for both Lucian and Violette. i enjoy reading the self conflict portrayed for Violette through your wrIting. The use of langauge, analogy and description all very vivid. Keep up the good work and well done!

4yr

mango_blossomLv4

Wanna know something ?! I haven't read the novel yet but I am writing this review with full confidence one and only because of the sypnosis . Have you ever read a sypnosis as amazing as this??!! No right ! And the way she portrayed it is awesome I'm gonna read this novel after my online classes coz this is my break 😝 Until then bye bye 😘❤️

4yr

f1nLv11

If not for the slow rate of updates this novel would be a hit for me. Why? The characters are fleshed out. The story/plot intrigues me when it comes to the future of it. And what strikes me the most is to have the chance to create bonds with these unique characters. Now that I'm typing this, I think that the once a week schedule is why the quality is so high. . . Anyways, getting back onto the review itself. To which I have one more thing to say, "Author! Make us more chappies!"

4yr

minho_ShinyLv3

That was a very good story and I'm looking forward to read more. Writing quality is top notch and I really can't find any grammar mistakes( I'm still in learning stage...so I really don't know much) . Author did a very good job in description part and keep up the good work dear author. I believe in perfection rather than completion... So as for updates of the story, I don't have any complaints. I'm cheering for you author. This five star rating is for the authors hard work and please do continue to deliver such more good works.

4yr

Sally112425Lv4

The story seems to be pretty interesting specially about the fact that the husband is doting. I really like to read stories where we have a wife slave as well as daughter slave. Do give it a read

4yr

SleepyKolaLv12

The synopsis pretty much summaries it all😂 tbh, i like the plot and development, i really wanted to uncover the MC's past and all. The writing style is easy to understand, it is really good. Grammar? I think there was no mistake. Great work Author! Keep updating

4yr

Gargi_Sharma_0085Lv10

I really love how characters are noticing the subtle things about each other . How both seem so strong yet fragile. And the male characters are so empathetic and making you wish there are more people like them in this world.

4yr

Khyati94820Lv1

The plot here is completely different and unique, it has the ability to attract readers very well. The storyline, the characters, the opening scene all are on point. Really been a while since I found a great book like this. Keep doing what your doing coz it's really awesome!

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