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2022-05-15 07:18

Don't read this novel if you don't like overbearing and cold 🥶❄️ ml who decide everything and is so wayyy over the top with it! don't give FL the chance to refuse or chose anything !! the only one who decide it and I feel like they got together with him threatening her and coercing her to it! At first FL is strong and cool but then her character development go down 👎👎 in front of ml ! no substance at all! she is meek and just keep nodding her head to everything he said ! i really hate it ! i wish he court her the right way not forcing her , and be patient till she accepts but no!!! just way overbearing and so cold 🥶! i don't know ho people can read about this kind of ml! they are the worst !!!! i don't enjoy force relationship !!! the way the author wrote it do that it can be accept is disgusting 🙂; anyway read on your own risk! first 100 are nice if we excluded the ml !

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