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2021-12-11 19:54

Overall, I like the plot. The way author write the background character is also good however, I wonder what happen to MC father? We barely heard anything from him. I also don’t like the Male Lead, he is so generic. Cold faced, Mr. Perfect, Overbearing CEO. Nevertheless, this novel is a good read

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WARNING FOR ALL THOSE ROMANCE LOVERS! *SPOILER ALERT* I really really loved this book. It's full of interesting ideas and written extremely well. It's not your typical novel. It's a novel with a twist: ghosts! The story is so exciting that I had to stay awake to read it. One arc had me comepletely hooked where I really couldn't take my eyes off but was afraid to continue reading at the same time. I had goosebumbs all over. BUT if you are a romance lover OR hate posessive and crazy MLs, I unfortunately have to disappoint you. I read this story until chapter 560 and I'm not sure if I am able to continue it. The only reason why I was reading it until now was because of its unique concepts with ghosts, charms, exorcism and more. I loved how everyone mocked her for being so young and believing in strange things. When she warns them she gets all the hate. In the end they idolize her and want to buy all her talisman and what not. I love those faceslaps! BUT that ML... no I can't. At first I just ignored the chapters with him in it and scrolled past their interactions. I'm sorry but I don't like him AT ALL. There's nothing romantic about their relationship. I hate it when the ML is all about "I want you... NOW" and he's that ML. How can it be romantic when she says she doesn't want to and he ignores it and gives it to her the whole night even if it hurts her just because he's thirsty? The story was tooooo exciting for me to just abandon it. That's why I read it that far. But chapter 560 had me thinking.... Here's an excerpt: “The pain was worse than when someone had bitten her just now. Chi Shuyan woke up and her face changed. She was about to turn around, when the man behind her grabbed her waist. Sensing the familiar male hormones, Chi Shuyan finally realized who the man behind her was, where she was, and what the man was doing. Wait, it was already so late; what was this man still doing? Qi Zhenbai turned his wife’s head and kissed her fiercely a few times, making her swallow a lot of his saliva before he let go of her, panting heavily. He said in a deep and hoarse voice, “Continue sleeping, don’t worry about me!” Chi Shuyan: … After a while, Chi Shuyan was tormented until she was sweating profusely. How could she sleep? Also, did this man take some sort of medicine or was he provoked by something tonight? Why was he being so aggressive? Chi Shuyan’s mind was blank and she no longer had any other thoughts.. She drifted in and out of consciousness.” -> "Continue sleeping, don’t worry about me!" Whaaat? -> "She drifted in and out of consciousness." Excuse me again, but whaaat?? All in all if you don't care about the romance or the ML, I can only recommend it. The story is sooo soooo good!! Why does the ML have to be like that? T-T

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