Item: Tangling with the Western Commander
Rating: 4
Author: Muthoni_Murira

Muthoni_MuriraLv133yr

2021-05-18 15:03

I love this story but I also have a big complaint. I really can't stand how the story skips the kissing and smut parts, it's too much. I don't know if it's the author's or translator's fault but it is really annoying to get hyped up only to end up disappointed. Otherwise, this story is a delightful change from the usual. The characters are not copypasted from other novels and the FL is not a saint who is too good for this world.

Tangling with the Western Commander

Fu Jiu

4.5

456 Chs

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Muthoni_MuriraLv13

Update: I am currently on chapter 616. First, the author tends to get lost on irrelevant matters and glosses on important factors. As the story goes on, sometimes the characters tend to be preoccupied with small things while they ignore the big things that are happening around them which is very unnatural. Second, the relationship between the ML and the FL is very sweet. However, they hide a lot of things from each other in the name of 'being thoughtful', 'not important, 'I don't want him/her to worry or get angry'...etc. These occurrences are sometimes so ridiculous that you question the author's/characters understanding of what a relationship should be. Third, the characters sometimes have thoughts that make you feel very uncomfortable. In this modern society, it is not just the man's place to provide a living for the family. It is disturbing to note that the author seems to think that it is shameful for a woman to contribute to the household's finances. In my mind, marriage is an equal partnership and both partners are a unit. For now, I will continue reading and update again later.

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