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ElizaALv34yr
2020-08-03 04:29

I read up to 6 chapters and really couldn't be bothered anymore. 1. ML has high IQ but a negative EQ when it comes to girls. His "daily life" EQ is ok and knows how to consider other people's feelings...just not FL'S. So many misunderstandings one after the other because he doesn't understand how to interact. 2. Now these "misunderstandings" would be cute if both characters had redeeming characters worth waiting around for but that's not the goal here, therefore FL's attitude and character is absolute TRASH. She's cocky, entitled, probably spoiled and gets off on being the smartest one in class + submitting her test first. (So as a reader, I don't give 2 shits about FLs anger...but our boy MC here, for some reason, takes a fancy to her. So his thoughts are either a) studying b) FL. BUT WE DON'T LIKE FL *flips table*) 3. When ML gets his system, he just uses it without question, gets a whole lot smarter. System is cool in the beginning...but then you realize it's really a flirt sensor. Bonus points for flirting, minus points for being bad at flirting. And again, as someone who doesn't like FL. This flirt sensor is annoying.

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Alanray64
Alanray64Lv15

I read up to chapter 24 and just gave up, it really is not grabbing my attention at all. MC is boring as f*#k with zero EQ. I reckon I have it a decent go but I couldn’t take anymore of the drivel being written. One to pass for sure

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hung_up_my_coat
hung_up_my_coatLv3

Meh i guess i dislike the system, like the whole flirting thing made no sense. How is getting punished flirting... The characters are super basic, the mc seems to have no personality, as the system will craft him into a possible simp. And all hes been doinf is obsessing over this one girl ... i dialike the female leads character.I dislike her as a person, for beinf a basic bit.ch. And the fact that ahe cant deal with such a little loss... But whats worse is that the character herself just feels like it gonna be used to push the mc in a certain. Direction and eventually make him fall in love or some cliche bs. The teacher ia pretty bad clearly she doeant know how to teach. My opinion of course. But i can already see the author gonna trick us into thinking she is a good person by saying oml she ia still teaching even though ahe had surgery. A broken boomer ia still a boomer. She can be a great person but she ia still a horrible teacher. I can see thia book consisting in just many many conaidiences with forced comedy that realistically would never happen, and ita slightly ironic. The author can give us questions that need "logic" but he isnt clever enough to give actual unique characters and unique interactions and settings, its instead incredibly cliche and basic. Oh yeah why was watching videos not relaxing... Idnt understand, if ur an introvert all that flirting would do is tire u out. Especially someome like him who has never done it. Like i said the system makes no sense and will just be a plot device to force the mc into dumb plota because the author isnt creative enough to make the character fall into that setting naturally.

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