Review Detail of _VA_ in Reborn princess: I will change my ill-fate

Firstly, I just wanted to say: The author's writing style has a mysterious quality to it. Even though there are many grammar/clarity issues, the writing style is nevertheless a piece of art and very attractive. I unknowingly read more and more. But there are some parts that you should fix. For example, in the synopsis: Instead of writing "... in the crime of misleading the authorities, attempt to murder the Princess and the murder of the almighty emperor..." you could write "... in the crimes of misleading the authorities, attempted murder of the Princess, and killing of the almighty emperor..." Also, maybe you could split up the larger paragraphs? The large chunks of text can be difficult to read. The plot is so complex, and I'm loving every bit about it. No complaints there. The characters are a bit cliche, but cliches wouldn't be cliches if we didn't secretly enjoy them, right? Even though they don't exactly feel original, the characters are brought to life by the author's spectacular narrations. Emotions are very clearly expressed, an occurrence that I don't see much of these days. I applaud you once again. If there is one problem I have with the narration, its the constantly changing point of views. Maybe you should try learning how to connect scenes better so that everything flows more smoothly? Also, you should introduce new characters slowly and before they speak. In ch 7, the Eva and Sarah were introduced only when they spoke something relevant to the plot. It was as if they didn't exist previously. The story also needs some better world building. Since the story is set in an a medival themed (?) fantasy world, you should explain the aristocratic tiers more and the matters of the court. For example, what is the mc's family rank? I thought she was a princess, the only princess of the empire? And if her rank is high enough to be the fiance of the next emperor, how is it that some nobles can just carelessly mock her? I know for sure that in many medieval settings, mocking the empress/princess leads to execution. As a princess and the future queen, how is it that no one is guarding her when she was mugged? Yeah, so these questions should be answered. But overall, the book is pretty nice. Good luck author!