Review Detail of 8Eight in Fate's Reversal: The Divines Return
Review detail
Not gonna lie im kinda surprised about how few reviews this novel has and i think you should read it if you like game/mmo novels HOWEVER you should be warned, its one of those mmorpg novels where the game is something more than just a game eg something from the game can be used outside etc. most close comparisons would probably be novels like "guild wars" and "shuras wrath" if you care about game balance you are gonna have a field day. all titles and unique things are hilariously broken. anyway i cant complain about writing or updates, mostly typos updates are pretty consistent so +1 from here the story, there is some things which i dont really like, however they are personal preferences so i cant really hammer the author for that (mostly cultivators and swords) the development is pretty fluid and my biggest gripe is the huge amount of time spent in the desolate world/realm? and the short time between powerups, you dont really get a feel for how strong he really is. personally i wouldnt mind a slower burn with more detailed actions and descriptions. but still good +1 here Characters are excellent, i expected nothing and got a pretty good return. the cast we have some background on is really quite likeable, has flaws and strong points, sure it aint no shakespeare but is really quite good for a free webnovel. funnily enough i find the cast compelling enough for me to overlook my bias against swords and cultivators. the author has a good kind of eccentric way of writing, you can call it a bit edgy, but i find it quite compelling speeches specifically. combined with some pretty wholesome intimate parts. all in all i really like the characters +1 the world is probably the least developed both in and out of vr it does the job alright, but has minimal descriptions it is only 60 chapters so far, so take it with a grain of salt, packing character development and world building into 60 chapters is gonna be a challenge for even the best of writers suggestions/preferences as stated before i wouldnt mind the novel to burn a bit slower, things happen pretty fast i enjoy the details and descriptions of the world around him alot. a bit more world building and you are golden. i would say more chapters but on this point us readers will probably never be satisfied. best of luck with your novel -88
Fate's Reversal: The Divines Return
Syphiinz
Liked by 13 people
LIKEReplies3
I appreciate your wholesome review. Yeah the world has yet to be built in depth. As far as upgrades, it follows the pace of a real game where the beginning is quick but slows to a crawl later on. & Of course, those titles have to be overpowered but only to a certain extent haha. Intricate world building will start in let's say...soon. This first arc doesn't surround that. But even then, there probably won't be massive chapters of only world building. But once again 88, thanks 🙏🏽
doing chapters with only would building would target a very specific type of audience, but i remember it being written one of his missions is to building a kingdom. so ill bide my time its bound to happen eventually. regardless all of is still suggestion and opinion, so keep at whatever pace you like ill prolly keep reading, so keep at it cheif
Syphiinz:I appreciate your wholesome review. Yeah the world has yet to be built in depth. As far as upgrades, it follows the pace of a real game where the beginning is quick but slows to a crawl later on. & Of course, those titles have to be overpowered but only to a certain extent haha. Intricate world building will start in let's say...soon. This first arc doesn't surround that. But even then, there probably won't be massive chapters of only world building. But once again 88, thanks 🙏🏽