Item: Reborn In Avatar LOK
Rating: 1
Author: Carlos_Balbizan

Carlos_BalbizanLv13yr

2021-11-17 21:53

second chapter and I already know how it goes, protagonist in the style to be sorry or overcome... meaningless friendship with korra because he decided to come back (only after getting "strong" and following her development later) beyond this protagonist context that deserves the pity of the reader already being a cliché

Reborn In Avatar LOK

AvatarLOK2

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Please read more it is about taking a cliche and developing it deeper. I think reducing the story to this is ignoring important nuances that are the core of this story.

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