Compared to earlier fanfics, I can see a very distinct improvement in grammar - still not perfect, but the effort is visible. Next is the story - once again better than in the earlier stories - the MC uses his cheats much earlier, maybe even too quickly, but it is wish-fulfillment, so becoming OP is the goal. The MC - he is still a hypocrite - destroying people for being evil, but then committing genocide because of food, killing evil man, but giving godhood to evil women... Still, compared to previous fanfic, the MC is no longer a typical young master, is much more likable and his goals are more rational. I also liked his relationship with his parents and having a male friend, giving him power and a girl. The biggest problem with this story, as others already mentioned is the harem and romance part. By this point he has somewhere around 20 girls, I think... I wouldn't be able to remember even half of them. He collects them and then they are usually no longer mentioned - which is understandable, there is no way to describe so many women and continue any plot.
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