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Bogg_Dann
Bogg_DannLv54yr
2020-06-11 09:36

The mc's character makes this story unreadable for me. Compared to the mc of your other atg novel, this mc is dog****. I tried to read but i couldnt read past chapter 6

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I_am_inevitable
I_am_inevitableLv14

dude i feel your pain

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AzagalPlay
AzagalPlayLv13

I really liked the beginning, mc's personnality and the 'reverse isekai' thing. I know it's wish fullfillment but I mean, you just got in your first world, and on your fking FIRST DAY, you meet an annoying chick out of nowhere who's just making demands out of you with the classic 'I will do whatever you want me to do' after the mc says that he won't help her because that's just free trouble for him, he then walks away. But then Ms entitled, still asking for Dumbass mc's help is now sad, but the mc is a gentleman, he 'doesn't like when a girl cries' which is complete bs to just force the plot and the annoying girl on him, he instantly changes his mind and promises her to do what she wants, for no fking reason. I'm not gonna talk about the many obvious plotholes because that's just wish fullfillment and everything is supposed to go mc's way (like, the girl is the only one to notice the abnormality with the profound energy but every person stronger than her didn't, she's supposed to be a cultivator, in a dog eat dog world, so she must somehow be smart to have survived for this long, but she trusted the guy without even trying to sense if he had any hidden intentions (like abuse her for example) she told him that she would do anything he wants if he fullfilled her wish, also the mc is supposed to have the perception and experiences of 3 GODS, but he couldn't sense the girl till he checked his map obviously) Wish fullfillment stories are meant to make the reader feel good by making them identify to the mc, not make them feel like a dumbass who would do everything a girl coming out of nowhere and making demands. (Or like most of trashy wish fullfillment stories, make you gain a thousand girls in your harem effortlessly because of fortunate 'coincidences' and bc the girls are all dumb bit*ches that would fall for the mc just because he's handsome or says cringy things at the right moment.)

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