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Review Detail of KuramaTobi in Overpowered Soul Transmigrate In Apocalypse

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story just trys a little to hard to be mysterious and funny while at the same time trying to be super action packed. It could work if the author put more time into the foundation of the story but seems like he didn’t. To many things trying to happen at the same time makes the flow of the story kinda weak and uninteresting.

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Overpowered Soul Transmigrate In Apocalypse

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since it was my first time writing i messed up hard