Needs to work a little more on the grammer, the premise is alright so far but some minor loopholes in story. Might continue to read to see where it goes but hard to say.
Lazy_leon
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LIKEGreat that you don't take it negatively. I don't write reviews that often but I like Apocalypse settings and hope there is more out there so I hope to see this flourish out into a great story.
Lazy_leon:Thanks for the honest review.