Review Detail of Senior_Kill_Streak in Ilan Burke - Multiverse

Good start, so far... There are some grammatical errors here and there. It might help if you use a mobile app like Grammarly. They are very useful. As for your story, just keep writing and it will come together. As a fellow ******* writer, just keep your words honest and say write about what you are thinking. You may take some suggestions from your readers, but remember that this is your story. I'll give you a 5 for now. 😁