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Review Detail of Lucas_Yee in Forgotten - Villain Deku [BNHA/MHA AU]

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The idea behind the creation of this story is unique, however the plot has some holes in it. Some of them are also out-of-character. Other than that, this is a good story.

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Forgotten - Villain Deku [BNHA/MHA AU]

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I can totally understand this. Later in the story there has been many moments where I have done my best but the characters don't feel the same. I hope to improve in the future though!