Review Detail of Joseph_char in The Creation Stone

I'm going to do an honest review of this novel, so don't mind the stars that I gave because they aren't that accurate. First of all: the story is confusing, I don't know or understand the characters, world, or anything at all. All the chapters feel incomplete, it's like reading a story from the middle of it, I couldn't grasp anything. Second of all: quotation marks, grammar, commas, and punctuations are somewhat off the place. If you can, please take the time and edit your chapters author. Third of all: The pace that the story is going at is very confusing and extremely fast. At first, we were in a cave, then at an auction, then at someone's bedroom. The sudden change from character to character and from setting to setting is very uncomfortable and confuses you, you can't even connect the dots or analyze the story. I am sure that the author has a great story, it's just hasn't been delivered well. Writing needs patience before all, and if that isn't achieved then the story will go downhill, and it also needs good narration and dialogue. If you can, please try to hire someone who can deliver your story the way you want it. Also a piece of strong advice for you, the first chapter is everything. Try to re-write your first chapter and make it captivating for the reader so he can love the story and want to read more of it. Good luck