Heyo Readers, Seven here. Giving myself a shameless five star for my work. First of all I would like to inform it to all readers that my novel is not for heavy readers who like gore, bloodbath, smut etc..... I am making this novel for light-hearted readers who like the cultivation genre followed by comedy, action, and adventure. If I best describe my novel it's somewhat similar to the novel Cultivation Chat Group genre-wise but with completely different plots, characters and world-building. This is my first work, as a writer, hope everybody enjoys it.

These type of novels are my favorite but I can't find many of them. OP MC with decent comedy where he doesn't have to hide his powers because people will try to kill him out of jealousy or where random young masters try to kill him because he breathed near them. Daily life of the immortal king was another amazing one but it stopped getting updated.

Honestly? Poorly written, to the point where dialogue doesn’t make sense, and the characters just seem weird and unnatural. I’m dropping it because there are tons of much better novels out there. Don’t waste your time, the cultivation system isn’t anything new or revolutionary.

the story produces a new outlook on reincarnation novels with a confusion element to the mc, unfortunately the storyelement ment to make it comic relief also makes the story difficult to follow for the reader. It is missing it's structural integrity with both the worldbuilding and the paragraph building. the story is building on a difference between an old system and a new better system. The story are neither explaining nor is diving deeper into what the main story device is trying to do. Without a proper explanation it would be just as reasonable plot device to just be born, the comic relief and unanswered questions makes it a headache to start with, it stabilizes around chapter 30, but the introduction could be cut short by 28 chapters. However it is still a interesting take on cultivation and it can be strong story, if the beginning could be strengthened by some proofreading or explanation. with a focus on nonsensical parts instead of story it will instead mock the foundation it is trying to create in a universe instead of creation the comedical story it is trying to make. just soso but good enough

I have not read much of this book, but there was a huge info dump for the entire chapter early on and I do not know about update stability so I put 5 stars there were many Grammer mistakes in only a few chapters the characters are very bland as well

Step aside, a great reviewer coming in for a review. . . . just kidding, did you really believe that? Tbh, I suck at reviewing, so I will just say my thoughts. Author, this is ur novel, ur mc. MC should be an op character and have some harem, right? Mc should be lucky, and have good fortunes, with harem, right? Mc should be the main character who has harem, right? Forgive me, I think I am stuck at harem, but not my fault. The MC himself said so. MC wants a harem with beautiful one-sans and wants to be an op character, but out author don't let him. He has really tortured the MC, I think he will die if you don't give him his dream harem. The author is a M who liked to torture his MC ( that's a nice idea btw) If you continue doing this, I will steal ur mc and add him to my novel. I will give him Harem, make him OP and send him back to you for a revenge. joking aside, A really good novel with a good world background and character development and a joyful comedy.An awesome way to write cultivation mixed with sci-fi. Just hope that author-san stop torturing the mc too much, and give him harem please, Good jop author.

Many many congratulations to the author on reaching 1M views milestone . May you grow even more with time 😁👍🏻. This story is awesome and doing wonders!!!! And if anyone wanting/wants to read books with fantasy genre . Do check my book " Fatal " if you always wanted to read a mysterious male lead work.😁👍🏻

Hon wa subarashīdesu. Watashi wa anata ga sore o tsudzukeru koto o nozonde iru konseputo ga hontōni sukideshita. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

exaggerated reactions which makes me cringe and cant seem to get into the flow of the story since it changes from friggin serious to exaggerated stuff like mc's power and their reactions which imo is not funny, it might be funny for the author buy for me it is one hell of a cringy conversation..it is also confusing af