Review Detail of RenuKakkar in xxxxxxx

I have read 7 Chapters out of the 9 Chapters published. The story has an interesting plot. So far the unique character is the cat with the banana hat. The writing quality is good thought there are a few typos. These do not however, interfere with the reading of the book. The author is not only the narrator but also one of the characters. It seems like I am reading an autobiography at times. The meditation aspect in the first Chapter does not relate to the story or is it something the character does every day? What does he achieve by doing meditation? This needs to be explained. I was a bit confused thinking that the dungeon exploration was all in the game. But then the officials examining documents seemed real I feel that the emotions of the main character are not depicted. Shorter paragraphs would be helpful with more dialogues. All the best!