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Ordinarystranger71
Ordinarystranger71Author3yrOrdinarystranger71

So this is my third review. I will be clear and direct this time. My mind have changed and the story's plot have also changed. This novel will contain a mc who is very cruel and disregards human emotions. He has no goal at the beginning but slowly developed or find a goal to live for. He have multiple personalities, and he is a genius. He is talented but not like the op mc. In fact the story have many occurrences where the mc's weakness is revealed and how powerful the world is to give him a harsh lesson. There won't be any girls or romance here, even if there is a girl rushing to him he won't care or just play with her considering his mood. People are no more than a soul within a meat cover depending on bones to move and be stable. The name is bs, it was my mistake back then, but since it is contracted I don't want to resubmit the contract again so, this could be the structure. Name: Dimension Devouring Ghost. Genre: Fantasy, sci-fi is merely a sub one, the main is fantasy. Sci-fi is the one for his current world where in other, fantasy will be the main driving force. Update: Unstable (I will try to make it better) MC: Cold, cruel, emotionless, benefit seeking genius. (he might seem like a hypocrite in the starting chaps) Grammar: Bad and rough (will try (not sure though)) I am starting on a new novel (I won't be disclosing the information) so think of it as me working on it if I'm not updating on this one. I might have lost motivation but I have regained it so I will try to publish at least one chapter every 2 days. I appreciate the support. The reason why I gave this novel 3 stars is because of no reason. I don't want to rate it 5 stars which would look shameless neither would I want to rate it 4 stars because I feel like 3 is average, the middle (logically) and rating it medium is just alright.

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Game_Bunny
Game_BunnyLv2Game_Bunny

Could you perhaps review my novel. I dont know if im doing a good job or not

Vastoking
VastokingLv5Vastoking

Can you tell me about the mcs power, it it like those system novels?, I started reading this but I have soo many other novels i want to finish first

Ordinarystranger71
Ordinarystranger71AuthorOrdinarystranger71

no its not a system novel. the mc is a person described in the review and with his perception, he creates status where he could monitor himself. just that

Vastoking:Can you tell me about the mcs power, it it like those system novels?, I started reading this but I have soo many other novels i want to finish first
TheSilentDaoist
TheSilentDaoistLv6TheSilentDaoist

This is the most honest review I have ever read. I will read the novel and give it a review. Looking forward to it.

Cody_Burtch
Cody_BurtchLv2Cody_Burtch

add a love interest

Maddox9
Maddox9Lv10Maddox9

I have read a few chapters and you really did a good job, the mcs personality is a bit different from you described him he's not actually the ruthless type(in my opinion he's just logical and does things only of it benefits him) I usually avoid novels where the mc is tagged as ruthless because after 30-40 chapters you will discover he's more of a simp than even a bandit that things with his dick whenever a beauty is involved, so your novel is a breathe of fresh air. keep up the good work and am expecting more from you.

PerfectlyUnstable
PerfectlyUnstableLv4PerfectlyUnstable

it's ok to be shameless imo lol. who doesn't think their baby look good, even when they're told otherwise. lol

God_Of_Lazinesss
God_Of_LazinesssLv2God_Of_Lazinesss

When write an novel good protagonist but then you read Reverend insanity this happens It is just joke, anyway my favourite novel are WMW and Reverend insanity so you we are from the dark side .

Jorge_Correa
Jorge_CorreaLv15Jorge_Correa

I dont My lil brother loooks like trash

PerfectlyUnstable:it's ok to be shameless imo lol. who doesn't think their baby look good, even when they're told otherwise. lol
AbyssReader
AbyssReaderLv2AbyssReader

wait, you little brother aint your baby is he? why is he called your little brother than instead of your son?

Jorge_Correa:I dont My lil brother loooks like trash