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God_Of_Lazinesss

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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss7mth
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    I'm a bit confused here, so does he have to manually explode the fireball every time or it would automatically explode on contact and the advanced method is controlling the fireball's path and time of the explosion.

    Not discouraged, Ed continued to practice the spell a couple more times. It took him no more than an hour to master the basic casting and firing of the spell at which point he could confidently declare he had learned the spell. While he couldn't detonate the fireball spell at will he couldn't really complain. Vorgarag had already explained that the process would require precise calculations which he was obviously incapable of doing at his level.
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss7mth
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    this remindes me of Skyrim

    'A shaman is bound to have some books in their room, right?' Thus thinking so, Ed scavenged through the shaman's room without a tinge of guilt. The crypt helped him develop such an intrusive personality, there was not even a tread of hesitation as he scoured the room.
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss7mth
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    let make a guess here, the love interests grade would be probably A or B right so her she would be too unreachable for so he would work very hard with his heaven defying will to reach greater Hights even with his inferior talent, also to spice things up he probably has an hidden bloodline which extra OP which would be shown in later parts of the story.

    [Ability grade: D]
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss7mth
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    so main problem with girl is that, she just plain boring to read about because of the fact she literally has no character(for now). also give her peerless beauty and talent has zero value to readers(to me atleast) as It appears more like MC chasing and cardboard figure rather than real and top of that she pretty generic and cliched character having nothing unique to her. all in all I nothing against mc chasing an girl like but so many factors combined together make romance worst part of the story so far.

    Ch 8 Awaken
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss7mth
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    once again back to the generic route of super talented jade beauty.

    Over half of this 'fog' surged toward a delicate sleeping beauty. Compared to the disheveled appearances of the others, she looked as though she was doing nothing more than taking a sweet nap. Her visage made many want to scramble to protect her, the light smile on her pink lips causing a twitch in the hearts of those lucky enough to see it.
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss7mth
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    author did an masterstroke on this one, not just plot but mainly MC's character is put the test in this extreme condition and thank God he is on the smart side of the scale. in this chapter you clearly see MC best ability which is his brain which shown his his analysis of situation and make best desisions while also make his priority straight.

    Ch 6 Changes
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss7mth
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    it is not bad that*

    Ch 5 The Incident
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss7mth
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    nice so far, okay so first the good stuff is the world building and plot construction is very good as it show it show author's story telling and imagination is quite good. now only bad(at least for me) is probably the characters, by my personal reading experience the cast of characters introduced till now quite generic we have the hot blooded MC who has heaven defying will face any problem for his friends and family we got our classic young master who want MC's jade beauty [childhood friend (X)] love interest and will threaten you with his family, next we got MC brother like friend who always has MC back and will make jokes about girls. it not of the characters are generic but it would if there is not character development so I just hope the upcoming disaster give mc an chance to mature.

    Ch 5 The Incident
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss7mth
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    if author is going pull love of first sight bullcarp here then I am pretty disappointed. this type of romance just cringes me out. I can respect an proper romance where your are not just attracted to her beauty but her character and there really no shame in being attracted to based on there apperance that how it usually work there don't always have to be an 'special' connection.

    Leonel didn't know the answers to any of these questions, however he was enamored. There were other women just as beautiful as Aina, some of whom had even tried to deliver themselves into his arms. But there was something about this woman in his heart that overshadowed them all.
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss7mth
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    in my humble opinion, his approach is lot better than keeping it himself and confessing at the last day of college where she practically don't even know you. at least this way he has strong impression on her, negative or positive won't matter as long as he has time.

    "As long as she rejects me, I will leave her alone. But in four years, she's never said a word after one of my confessions. She always just runs off." Leonel swiped his finger under his nose a few times. "It's obvious she likes me."
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss7mth
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    Frist chapter, can't say I impressed but it is very promising mainly because of world building, not much is introduced but by level of detail it look like author has it fully planned. also most worrying part is probably mc as personally I don't like stupid MCs and the simp pathway don't sound good me. but its just the first chapter and there is thing called character development so as long as MC mature it will all worth it. same goes for romance character development is key as long as author can show she is worth it not just some jade beauty I don't really mind MC making some 'stupid' desisions.

    Ch 1 Leonel Morales
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss7mth
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    hardcore parkour

    Leonel didn't wait for his father's next sarcastic statement. He pushed opened the attic doors and swung himself out of the three-story high triangular windows. His actions looked no different from an attempt at suicide, but his hand just barely caught the ledge, swinging himself upward to latch onto a weakening water drainage pipe.
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss11mth
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    Kind of confused about the layout of the dengeon, I thought he was close to the boss room, he could have survived the if he had gotten the lice support.

    Ch 29 In Effect
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss11mth
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    I think not chasing the guy was the right choice because I don't think he would able to kill that guy while being in the state he is. Also about not wanting to kill is bad mindset to have in the world he is, i am not saying him kill mindlessly but kill smartly, don't go kill people who are innocent or whom you just don't like but definitely kill an person who has attacked you with intent to kill sparing such person would be plain stupidity. His character is still developing so don't want say anything now but if keeps his attitude like that and spares an enemy that he could have killed only to get more future troubles then I am definitely dropping, good guys are not my cup of tea.

    The dungeon really wanted the escapist dead but Ed still ignored the message. If he didn't need to face a penalty he didn't really care. His other skills were already good enough and the dungeon only gave him what he needed whenever it pleased, his assimilation skill alone was good enough for him. He wasn't keen on taking more lives.
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss11mth
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    this just self defense, if he didn't kill them then they would. While there is also the fact they are invading your home(if this counts as one) so by an moral stand point he has done nothing wrong.

    Ed simply looked away from the bodies and tried to convince himself that it was alright.
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss11mth
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    Okay then is this establishment only in this city or it more branches in other part of the kingdom, if so then why not just buy the herb form them. If they have emperor rank backing they then there should no problem for them to get herb delivered to his door with appropriate price without risking his life. A

    The Explorer Union had several people at the Emperor Realm behind it and was not something even the strongest empire on the Ewaria Continent would carelessly offend.
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
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    I think that would depend on the civilization itself, in cultivation world most of the time swords are mainstream that mean more people develop sword techniques which give them edge over other weapons which less developed. For example, when using weapon techniques the user would have to spend specific amount energy to use attacks then the more developed techniques would cost less energy and would do more damage. Of course, many novel do make sword unreasonably strong sometimes. I think authors should put some thought into this things as well so combat would not too unrealistic.

    The only reason that the Raging Flame Sect did not dare to attack the Flying Sword Sect was simply because they were a sword sect and sword cultivators were always famed for their strength in combat.
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    He take cloud as his cover unless their divine sense can reach that high

    "Hah, I better get going before I get found…" Casting a glance at the dead body one last time, Xuan Hao began moving towards the Burning Mountain Range with increased speed.
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss11mth
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    You messed with wrong god

    Colt heaved a sigh as Ania cut off their connection. 'Hopefully, we can get through this quest quickly. Donna should be no match for me personally, but it's a different matter if she sends her followers to deal with mine.'
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  • God_Of_Lazinesss
    God_Of_Lazinesss11mth
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    Did not learn his lesson when he got kicked out of his guild that saving others won't bring any good like literally in last chapter he mentioned not making the decision to sacrifice his teammates but what was the end result no one stud up for when he needed him.

    "I'm sorry…" Beans' lips trembled before she ran off to catch up with Donna.
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