Review Detail of Damndolla2 in The Devil Inside(mha)[dropped]

Honestly speaking, i was about to drop the book in the first few chapters. You’re ideas were good but the execution was too forced. But you’re writing has improved ten-fold since then and I can say that this fic from when Damien came to Japan onwards is one of the better MHA fics. Just try to rewrite or refine the first 20 chapters if you have the time. Please update soon!