Review Detail of black_dark in The Devil Inside(mha)[dropped]

The beginning of the story was great, but the limited vision of the author made the story bad especially how he made the hero in the same division as Midoriya and others. Also, changing the hero’s mentality is neither rational nor logical. It was a story that would be amazing if it made the hero evil. Unfortunately, it made the hero a boring person. Especially by making the hero can kill the third strongest character only at the age of 12 years. I think from that moment you ran out of new and innovative ideas. Unfortunately you made a junkyard story with amazing prospects because of your limited ideas