Review Detail of The_Bean_God in The Devil Inside(mha)[dropped]

I tried to like this but the story is so flawed its painful. 1st the characters are so 1 dimensional you can't relate to them 2nd the half of the supporting characters don't have names and 3rd you have probably the worst idea of how family members act towards each other. Twins up to a certain age are inseparable, parents feel protectively for their children unless the parent in question has severe mental health issues they wouldn't act like they do in the "book", good luck with your attempts at writing I hope you get better.