Review Detail of Hgoma in Ren's Adventure in Tales of Demons and Gods

Sorry buddy ,didn't read the synopsis. , if you want, I'll remove this review. You are messing up the past tenses most of the time. Also, you are not mentioning words like he, him, her, etc where they are required. If you are looking to improve your English ,start watching some English show with English subtitles ,it's fun and actually worked for me.