Review Detail of AxiomDoggo in Phone App: Portable Armory

Disclaimer: I didn't get too far into the novel. With that out of the way... This is a good novel with its potential dragged down by bad (2) technical writing, but the other aspects are passable (3), good (4), or can't be judged from how far I got/great (5). Writing Quality: Lots of grammatical errors and constantly changing pronouns. Sometimes the author even randomly calls the main character by a random name. Update Stability: Self-explanatory Story Development: Decently fast paced so it's not a slog. However, that fast pace makes it so that the events of the story aren't that fleshed out and seems rushed if you're used to longer, more descriptive novels. Character Design: The characters feels a bit flat. Their biggest downfall is that they are coldblooded murderers from the start, with no reaction to kills. However, the author is good at making them recognizable even when they haven't been named. World background: The system is good. I haven't gotten far enough to judge anything so 5 stars. Note: It appears that the GL/Yuri is only temporary before turning straight and het again. The author should comment if I'm wrong.