Thanks for reading my book. Though I will give the problems on this book. Especially since some of them could be fatally disturbing. The Unsynchronization between the info on chapter 1 and 3: The user number on the AppStore is manipulated by the system itself. Chapter 37: It's really the biggest turnoff as far as I know. Well, tbh, I plan so the relationship between him and her could be different. Yeah, he still likes her and he would find a way to get her heart again. Don't worry though, he will be changed back as soon as the business with the Russians is over. That's all I can give for now. Thanks for reading this.
MaxwellKHA
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LIKEwell im not really into perfectionist about grammar .. english isn't my mother language neither but you even make the basic mistake that you shouldn't have about someone gender with using she/he (the opposite). that's really turn me off to continue :( hope you can edit it soon so i can read this again. thanks :)