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Review Detail of wShiro in The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

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wShiro
wShiroLv102yrwShiro

Good: - Good character development - Not tooooo op neither weak - Good world background - Characer design is meh. Wished you could change his appearance a littleee more when he evolves like his height :)))) Bad: - Spells wrong words. (Sometimes) - Wrong grammar (Sometimes - Very cringe speech’s every 2 chapters. Mc talking about how he’s falling down in the abyss. Then his friends helps him. Keeps repeating - Every villain has a backstory of his wife/mother getting r*ped. I mean literally every single one. (This one is annoying.. make a different story then letting his wife getting r*ped.) - Unnecessary plots like: let the mc be not disturb him every time he finishes something like getting teleported to the sub worlds. - More speeches of how he doesn’t feel anything by killing people. How he is a monster and it’ controlling him. Its more annoying and weird speeches but I don’ remember the content. - Wastes 1,5/10 of the chapter with the preview of the past chapters. - Mc is like a edgy dark character but he changes :) -

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The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

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wShiro
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The event where he enters the sub world is too long. That is what I mean with unnecessary plots like let him stay in his original world