Review Detail of LaurentCross in Razevan Lucifer
Review detail
Story is good except the mc is a beta and grayfias Bitch so I couldn't continue it. I don't understand why aurthors enjoy beta cuck mcs. Basically your mc single handedly ruined this story.
Razevan Lucifer
GreatSage_Master1
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1 -I read the entire fic at once, the MC remains boring and lame throughout the story, without use or change in it, as his existence doesn't change anything, I thought the story would tell something new, but all there was was Grayfia staying with the MC for silly reasons, even though it looked like Sorczhes had more chemistry than they did. 2 - If you have to read 50 chapters of a story for it to "start" to be good, then it's not worth it, especially when the MC is shit.
SilentByakko:I'm sad when people drop something so early. The best part about most stories is the character development, yet you don't even give it a chance. It would be better to wait until it builds up 30-50 chapters before leaving a review about early character personality that is likely to change. This is what chapter comment's are for, not book reviews.
lol just so the aurthor dosent delete my review but never less the grammar is pretty good and the world background and the side characters aren't stupid and undeveloped so a plus .
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I'm sad when people drop something so early. The best part about most stories is the character development, yet you don't even give it a chance. It would be better to wait until it builds up 30-50 chapters before leaving a review about early character personality that is likely to change. This is what chapter comment's are for, not book reviews.
SilentByakko:I'm sad when people drop something so early. The best part about most stories is the character development, yet you don't even give it a chance. It would be better to wait until it builds up 30-50 chapters before leaving a review about early character personality that is likely to change. This is what chapter comment's are for, not book reviews.
It's only boring because you read it 1 chapter at a time. I've just started, so I can binge it all. It's not nearly as frustrating as you say, it's just the impatience you feel from interrupted reading.
PRAW_NC:30-50 chapters?!Read 50 chapters with dull MC ?! Thanks, no.
I agree with you brother, a story focused on Sirczhes would be very good, it would be like seeing the story of Minato or Jiraya before Naruto was born, it would add more depth to the world and the other characters.
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Not to mention how interesting it would be to see Sirczhes having to deal with the political plot and pressure of being a Satan Lucifer, but...we got it now.
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