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Zoro_The_Dark
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2020-11-30 22:44

I won't reduce stars of writing quality because I know that it is your second novel. The updating stability is medium. I really like the character design and world background. The story development is also at its finest. ;-)

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Zoro_The_Dark
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Btw, i would be glad if you'll try my novel. Its genre is fantasy. It has a little gore in it. I won't force you, but please give it a try :)

Septic_Red
Septic_RedAuthor

You got me at the part of Gore. And anyway... This is the first novel I am writing and this one is just a test just to help me in practicing a novel. Anyway thanks for the review, brotha!

Zoro_The_Dark:Btw, i would be glad if you'll try my novel. Its genre is fantasy. It has a little gore in it. I won't force you, but please give it a try :)
Zoro_The_Dark
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I wanted to write "I won't be dropping stars for writing quality because I know English is your second language" SMH what is wrong with my brain, lol.

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