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2021-03-08 21:38

With currently 107 chapters, it's a really amazing novel. It's a slow burn as you start, with us exploring more about our MC and I like the way how characters tells us about his experiences as he goes on with his adventure. I also like the subtle use of humor at the beginning, tbh I haven't been able to finish it but it's surely is very well as I am continuing. I am also eager to learn more about the characters and story as I will continue reading this. Really a great work! KEEP UP!👍 There are some grammatical errors at the beginning chapters but it's really a small thing looking at the hardwork you are putting in it, with the amount of chapters you have written it's hard to find everything. But none the less it's a great work!❤️

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