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Falbium
FalbiumLv133yrFalbium

The system idea is good, but the author wants to make mc to be the devil slave. So mc has come to dxd world before the plot? And didn't gate to interact with the main chara? Wow, 1year in the same school but didn't get to build relationships with anyone from dxd main plot?.

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Deleted Novel

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Lunarian_King
Lunarian_KingLv5Lunarian_King

You know yo are just bashing devils for no reason As angels have the very same system just called Brave saints system and is based on card game instead of chess And they would have fallen especially the seraphs if they just got the tiny idea of commetting a sin {Slavery included} forget doing it . So if Devils Evil pieces system is slavery then say the same thing about angels Brave Saints system . Otherwise you are just bluffing with fake reason , fake hate , fake sense and fake proofs . Wonder what fake things you still get . When even the author of DxD didn't call the thing slavery , you are being bold to claim something the original author of DxD never did . So just go away with your fake hatred . You are just trying to ruin the author book

Doge_Blade
Doge_BladeLv13Doge_Blade

Bruh, your a *****, I hope you know that, hating after you read like half a chapter??? Go be a cunt somewhere else, no one wants to see your ****ty little comment typed by your irrelevant ass, little *****. He really isn’t a slave, he literally does not have to follow any of sonas rules at all, no punishment either, the other thing you said, yeah it’s plot because he doesn’t feel like having to write like 100 chapters of the mc fucking people at 6 years old, *****

Supreme_Devil
Supreme_DevilLv4Supreme_Devil

Suck the author virtual d1ck, he like that and if you are lucky he will fk your homo a*s too.

Doge_Blade:Bruh, your a *****, I hope you know that, hating after you read like half a chapter??? Go be a cunt somewhere else, no one wants to see your ****ty little comment typed by your irrelevant ass, little *****. He really isn’t a slave, he literally does not have to follow any of sonas rules at all, no punishment either, the other thing you said, yeah it’s plot because he doesn’t feel like having to write like 100 chapters of the mc fucking people at 6 years old, *****
Supreme_Devil
Supreme_DevilLv4Supreme_Devil

Suck the author virtual d1ck, he like that and if you are lucky he will fk your homo a*s too.

Doge_Blade:Bruh, your a *****, I hope you know that, hating after you read like half a chapter??? Go be a cunt somewhere else, no one wants to see your ****ty little comment typed by your irrelevant ass, little *****. He really isn’t a slave, he literally does not have to follow any of sonas rules at all, no punishment either, the other thing you said, yeah it’s plot because he doesn’t feel like having to write like 100 chapters of the mc fucking people at 6 years old, *****
Doge_Blade
Doge_BladeLv13Doge_Blade

Oh look, another irrelevant dumbass being a annoying cunt

MonkeTroll
MonkeTrollLv4MonkeTroll

I wouldn’t say the brave saint system is slavery because you see the moment a seraph or high-level angel try doing what rias or anyway with out the other party approval then they fall and can’t have a saint this is just a theory and my belief

Lunarian_King:You know yo are just bashing devils for no reason As angels have the very same system just called Brave saints system and is based on card game instead of chess And they would have fallen especially the seraphs if they just got the tiny idea of commetting a sin {Slavery included} forget doing it . So if Devils Evil pieces system is slavery then say the same thing about angels Brave Saints system . Otherwise you are just bluffing with fake reason , fake hate , fake sense and fake proofs . Wonder what fake things you still get . When even the author of DxD didn't call the thing slavery , you are being bold to claim something the original author of DxD never did . So just go away with your fake hatred . You are just trying to ruin the author book
Lunarian_King
Lunarian_KingLv5Lunarian_King

The same I wouldn't say evil pieces is slavery. Both are the same just different item are used one use chess other use game cards. If you know that angels will fall for such a thing then you cannot call evil pieces slavery when brave saint was made as a copy from evil pieces just changed the basr from chess to game cards. That is straight bash for devils. Most people came saying rias found her servants at the moment of need cause she was planing it. I would say to those. You dumb idiots!! All of her servants have problem with another faction where devils have no power over. Kiba was related to church Akeno was related to both fallen angels and himejima clan (one of the five great clans of japan) Gasper is related to vampires Koneko related to a devil (alone) she was taken and lied to by another devil clan that was doing experiments on her sister who kept it a secret to protect her sister.(reason for the sisters separation is old devils governament where even maous does not have any power over, instead it is the other way around.) Tell me how is rias a ***** when she saved them, you don't expect her to go and wipe their enemies, this is idiotic move a faction attacking others for what because she found someone related to that faction almost dead and then reincarnate him? She have responsability over him after not before what happen to him or her. You all like to make her sound like a b*tch and a schemer. Issei case, she gave him the fliers right? It was up to him if he could summon her, and he barely did on death door and I remember her comming the moment he used it. What else you want to know? Why did she collect a peerage to try fight riser. Is it your business or hers? She can have any servants as long as they don't have anything against being reincarnated so far none seems to want go quite her peerage even after they all became high class devils where they could've left peerage and start their own only issei left and made his peerage. I know most of the haters of rias are based on fanfics, thinking she actually act like the fanfic. I said most of what I wanted to say. Don't come tell me I have sweet thoughts and dumb for ignoring thr correct facts, cause that is where I will say STOP! What right do you havr to make your opinion into facts, did DxD maker told you rias is b*tch and she is a schemer and that devils are slave traders . . . . . No he didn't, then stop trying making your opinion into facts even though you and I know that DxD maker made most of devils simply too kind and good, but haters narrowed that and start making their rumors thag devils are scums, worst than trash . . . Once a guy didn't find how to counter me his last reason is they are devils and devils are wicked and evil . . . When in the LN only rezivem is the only one who got such thoughts, rest showed a lot of kindness, it's just people that never admit being wrong or in mistake even with all proofs they will laugh and shruggs it off.

MonkeTroll:I wouldn’t say the brave saint system is slavery because you see the moment a seraph or high-level angel try doing what rias or anyway with out the other party approval then they fall and can’t have a saint this is just a theory and my belief
Lunarian_King
Lunarian_KingLv5Lunarian_King

I am not trying to push my opinion on you but give proofs about it. People tend to narrow and twist characters to satisfy themselves. Ending up making thier little fantasy about those characters becomes a fact for their own. It's like lying and believing the lie is the truth yourself. So I am not gonna follow people opinion based on a hater that made a fanfic and seems to ne doing well with it.

MonkeTroll:I wouldn’t say the brave saint system is slavery because you see the moment a seraph or high-level angel try doing what rias or anyway with out the other party approval then they fall and can’t have a saint this is just a theory and my belief
MonkeTroll
MonkeTrollLv4MonkeTroll

It is a theory did you expect me to have the ability to know everything or travel through dimensions to know this I am not the creator of dxd

Lunarian_King:I am not trying to push my opinion on you but give proofs about it. People tend to narrow and twist characters to satisfy themselves. Ending up making thier little fantasy about those characters becomes a fact for their own. It's like lying and believing the lie is the truth yourself. So I am not gonna follow people opinion based on a hater that made a fanfic and seems to ne doing well with it.
MonkeTroll
MonkeTrollLv4MonkeTroll

Okay but can I ask your opinion about what the action of rias after riser!

Lunarian_King:The same I wouldn't say evil pieces is slavery. Both are the same just different item are used one use chess other use game cards. If you know that angels will fall for such a thing then you cannot call evil pieces slavery when brave saint was made as a copy from evil pieces just changed the basr from chess to game cards. That is straight bash for devils. Most people came saying rias found her servants at the moment of need cause she was planing it. I would say to those. You dumb idiots!! All of her servants have problem with another faction where devils have no power over. Kiba was related to church Akeno was related to both fallen angels and himejima clan (one of the five great clans of japan) Gasper is related to vampires Koneko related to a devil (alone) she was taken and lied to by another devil clan that was doing experiments on her sister who kept it a secret to protect her sister.(reason for the sisters separation is old devils governament where even maous does not have any power over, instead it is the other way around.) Tell me how is rias a ***** when she saved them, you don't expect her to go and wipe their enemies, this is idiotic move a faction attacking others for what because she found someone related to that faction almost dead and then reincarnate him? She have responsability over him after not before what happen to him or her. You all like to make her sound like a b*tch and a schemer. Issei case, she gave him the fliers right? It was up to him if he could summon her, and he barely did on death door and I remember her comming the moment he used it. What else you want to know? Why did she collect a peerage to try fight riser. Is it your business or hers? She can have any servants as long as they don't have anything against being reincarnated so far none seems to want go quite her peerage even after they all became high class devils where they could've left peerage and start their own only issei left and made his peerage. I know most of the haters of rias are based on fanfics, thinking she actually act like the fanfic. I said most of what I wanted to say. Don't come tell me I have sweet thoughts and dumb for ignoring thr correct facts, cause that is where I will say STOP! What right do you havr to make your opinion into facts, did DxD maker told you rias is b*tch and she is a schemer and that devils are slave traders . . . . . No he didn't, then stop trying making your opinion into facts even though you and I know that DxD maker made most of devils simply too kind and good, but haters narrowed that and start making their rumors thag devils are scums, worst than trash . . . Once a guy didn't find how to counter me his last reason is they are devils and devils are wicked and evil . . . When in the LN only rezivem is the only one who got such thoughts, rest showed a lot of kindness, it's just people that never admit being wrong or in mistake even with all proofs they will laugh and shruggs it off.