Review Detail of Oto in Stuck as a Dungeon Mob
Review detail
Terrible novel. So many things wrong with this one, but it all boils down to one thing: the author. In this novel you will find the following: - MC acting dumb or ignorant of something that happened literally one paragraph prior or even right in front of him - Letting enemies go intentionally becuase he is ‘too lazy’ and that leading to massive (obvious) consequences, to which the MC later pulls a “wait, what happened?” - Convenient plot armor such as MC gaining a skill or knowledge that just so happens to solve a major problem that arises just a short while later - Author forcing plot via using problems between system and dungeon - Author constantly going off on tangents and losing of direction in writing the plot I’m not going to go on. If these are acceptable to you, go ahead and read it. In fact, this novel is better than 99% of the original novels on this site where the ‘author’ can’t even write a proper sentence. At the very least, apart from some occasional cringe dialogue, this novel’s langauge is par. Not for everyone, acceptable for some, but not for me. Read at your own discretion.
Stuck as a Dungeon Mob
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Ouch, thanks for reading. This was my first real novel and as I've told others it does get better in regard to some of your points. I still have a tendency to... well describing it as losing the plot seems a bit harsh to me but I suppose it's true to an extent. While the overarching plot is always present in the future (Humans vs dungeon), there are moments where I dedicate one or two paragraphs to something Ed is doing explicitly or a sort of smaller arc with say the orcs. Needless to say, I still have room for improvement I appreciate your honest thoughts, thanks again.