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Review Detail of Daoist_Rahul in Stuck as a Dungeon Mob

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Daoist_Rahul
Daoist_RahulLv33yrDaoist_Rahul

First Of all I would like to say I'd you are here to decide whether to read it or not yes give it a try Author has done a great job in writing quality as a starter and grammars are decent paragraphs are well written and dialogue is very sensible not to shabby world building is decent as well Now the good side is done there is some mistakes like some times it's hard to understand why health upgrades and why decrease it's confusing and how the system works is confusing too . As a Seasoned reader I consider myself hehe I have strict requirements but I loved this book continue your work :)

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Aviella_Martinez
Aviella_MartinezLv2Aviella_Martinez

I agree

Lastear
LastearLv15Lastear

I really want to edit the grammar in this comment. *cringe

Milk_Dewd
Milk_DewdLv1Milk_Dewd

bruh how can I judge grammar when yours is this bad...

Jefferson_Alamen
Jefferson_AlamenLv3Jefferson_Alamen

mmmmmm

Milk_Dewd:bruh how can I judge grammar when yours is this bad...
Jefferson_Alamen
Jefferson_AlamenLv3Jefferson_Alamen

mmmmm

Daoist_Paradox
Daoist_ParadoxLv4Daoist_Paradox

Hello Daoist_Rahul! I'm Daoist Paradox!

Rabiddoughnuts
RabiddoughnutsLv15Rabiddoughnuts

it's really not confusing at all, it says exactly which body of his it's talking about right before the health, only way it's confusing is if you just ignore entire sections of his stat page.

Dayside
DaysideLv12Dayside

then why tf did you give it 5 stars? Why not 4 or 3